shay
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Post by shay on Apr 9, 2010 1:20:11 GMT 1
hi everyone my name is shay i have just started my pest control company up, we are a small family run pest control service in rugby i have been doing pest control for a little over 20 years now but i wanted to go it alone so to speak this is my website www.cngpestcontrol.co.uk i was told about this forum from friends of mine on another hunting forum. shay
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Post by stubby on Apr 9, 2010 4:37:44 GMT 1
welcome to the site, dont take this the wrong way, but you need to check your spelling out on the website, some people may see bad spelling as a cowboy set up, Id either add more pictures, or remove the single one for now, as you click on that page, expecting more than a shelving system and gauno, or expand on the information with it, you could say your there to 1,clean/remove gauno 2,shoot/capture/remove pigeons 3, pigeon proof entry point etc thats already giving the customer more information and maybe a reason for them to ring you
and I dont know about others, but Id loose the "24hr" call out, otherwise you'll get stupid calls at stupid o clock that dont earn you a penny,
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Post by davy on Apr 9, 2010 8:59:21 GMT 1
Welcome, it's a scary thing starting on your own. I've been going just under a year now. Enjoy the forum.
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Post by cumbria wildlife managment on Apr 9, 2010 9:28:55 GMT 1
Welcome on board shay weather your working for a big firm your LA or starting out on your own,This is the place to be.
Regards Gaz
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Post by hawkeye on Apr 9, 2010 20:11:44 GMT 1
how do shay,you will like it on here,complete nut house ;D
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Post by ezkill on Apr 9, 2010 21:37:29 GMT 1
welcome on board Shay, welcom to the "nut house" ;D
lots of good people, and very good advice on here
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Post by baldbrummy on Apr 10, 2010 9:20:30 GMT 1
Hi CnG welcome to the best pest control forum on the net where people will do all they can to help. Please do not take this the wrong way, I have just had a look at your website you need to look at it again as there are a lot of spelling and grammar issues including spacing between words that need looking at. To be blunt if I were a potential customer looking at your site I would not call you. What you should do is highlight and copy every page one at a time then paste it onto word and do a spelling and grammar check use this to put it right then copy the corrected wording go back to you website delete the old text and replace with the new. Hope this helps please don’t take offence we are here to help.
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Post by ezkill on Apr 11, 2010 23:39:52 GMT 1
hello shay, and may i say welcome, again
well done you, for setting up a business, and creating a website, a portal for your customers; i take my hat off to you, i've been thinking about going it alone for 3 years
but, have a look at your spelling and phrases:
home to the midland's favourite provider of pest control solutions = ??
This is by no mean exhaustive, = spelling mistake
Bedbugs/ Rabbits/ants/beetles = bad use of capital letters
these are all trivial mistakes, to some people, but as was pointed out earlier, could make a big difference
i don't mean to be picky or anything like that, but you need to fine tune your "window" imagine walking past a shop window full of mistakes
i'll say it again; well done in setting up your business, and creating your web site, i wish you the best of luck in your venture, wish i had the bottle to go it alone
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Post by eradicator on Apr 12, 2010 5:11:51 GMT 1
hi Shay welcome on board
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Post by neil on Apr 12, 2010 22:26:10 GMT 1
Hello again Shey, how did the exam go? Did you manage to get on that Phostoxin course?
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Post by castlepest on Apr 22, 2010 20:23:20 GMT 1
Welcome shay welcome to hard work little money and a real reason to get up for in the mornings, this is a great forum with nice people
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